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THE ONCE POETIC HERO
Contributed by
hray42
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Tuesday, 20th March 2012 @ 10:55:02 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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so they say that i have gone insane yes, i am known to be the crazy one i am a walking, talking, psychopath i am a devil with a double tongue i am a snake, i am a viper yes, i am a poisonous sort i am a villian with bad intentions i hold all in contempt of my liar's court i have fallen far from what was grace i am the once poetic hero whose boyhood dreams have now come lost i have become their pathetic zero this doesn't make you better than me i am not blinded by your idiot's wool i do know that after we bury this day you will be made to play the fool you fear me at this very moment as you have watched my downward spiral i can identify it in your coward's eyes so no need for a useless denial my life of late has been a futile joke it seems like nothing pleases more than anger now i feel that something stalks my troubled soul and sadly, this once poetic hero must surrender to this danger...
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Re: THE ONCE POETIC HERO
(User Rating: 1 ) by Luzinha on
Saturday, 24th March 2012 @ 05:48:09 PM AEST (User
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I liked your poem - you get a really good sense of anger and of not wanting to surrender to pity, but just to hurt. not because it's the other persons fault, but just because there is nothing else you can do. it's just a blinding and completely overpowering feeling.
Thank you for sharing, I hope writing the poem made you feel relieved! |
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