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Those Words of Yours
Contributed by
evah2121
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Tuesday, 20th March 2012 @ 07:49:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Those words that escaped your lips.
The words that peirced her heart when they accidentally slipped.
The words you didn't mean, but somehow ended up effecting her self-esteem.
Now makes her think that she's not worth anything
She looks in the mirror with a different perspective.
So now she stays away from her dreams cause she feels neglected.
Somehow her life changed when it wasn't expected.
Her future was bright, but now she's dark and disrespected.
Those words that escaped your lips..
have been lingering in her mind ever since.
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2012-03-20 19:49:56]
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Re: Those Words of Yours
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by dvtpdw on
Wednesday, 21st March 2012 @ 10:40:19 AM AEST
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| Great write!! I so agree, words are more than mere sounds. |
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Re: Those Words of Yours
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by Butterat_Zool on
Friday, 23rd March 2012 @ 07:03:27 PM AEST
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| Makes me wonder whether the person who said the hurtful words is just a jerk, or if it hurt so much because the words were true. The "How dare you know me?" angle is interesting. The "Why are you so mean?" angle seems either dishonest or incomplete. |
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