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Cold
Contributed by
dvtpdw
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Wednesday, 21st March 2012 @ 12:21:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Life is a circle, going round and round
To its reality, we are securely bound
Its rope entwines, tightens as we struggle
Or loosens, as the years we juggle
It can hold you secure or break apart
You can finish the end or jump the start
Will you have the courage to soar
Or will you trip going through the door
Hoping to be greeted by the warm sun
Look to the day, will this be the one
Or will you face the moon's dark cold
Only then realizing you're getting old
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dvtpdw
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2012-03-21 12:21:15]
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Re: Cold
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by Bookgoddess on
Wednesday, 21st March 2012 @ 01:25:06 PM AEST
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| Great write. It got better as I read. Love the end. This one came together nicely. Hope to see more from you. |
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Re: Cold
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 21st March 2012 @ 05:43:28 PM AEST
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Really great writing.
blessings,
emy
By the way Book Goddess is my grand daughter and I'm very happy to have her posting on this my home site. |
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