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The misguided
Contributed by
iodinelove
on
Thursday, 22nd March 2012 @ 05:28:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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You were beautiful
America
Your starry blue eyes
Cloaked in white tears
Squinting in the
Low light
Stumbling in the
Darkness
Of your own shadow
For justice you cried
You were beautiful
Your flag tied
To the masts
Of every dream
You were beautiful
The thundering cheers
Of your children
Quieted
In the stillness
Of war
For justice you cried
You were beautiful
America
Your plea
Rising in all of our
Hearts
Copyright ©
iodinelove
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2012-03-22 17:28:12]
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Re: The misguided
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by emystar on
Thursday, 22nd March 2012 @ 09:59:29 PM AEST
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Well there is my Abe, smiles.
Good to see something new, friend.
As always awesome writing.
Smiles, blessings,
emy |
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Re: The misguided
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by Elizabeth_Dandy on
Thursday, 22nd March 2012 @ 10:05:58 PM AEST
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Very poignant. Title and stanzas ring loud of the misguidedness of the many. Very sad, sad, sad. Especially the words "your flag tied to the masts of your dreams.
Thanks for sharing
Blessings
Elizabeth |
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Re: The misguided
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by PoeticThoughts on
Thursday, 22nd March 2012 @ 11:45:30 PM AEST
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| Brilliant! Very touching, very strong words that take your mind on a journey of thoughts and emotions with every point made in this poem! Just Brilliant! |
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