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Beautiful Lines
Contributed by
Luzinha
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Saturday, 24th March 2012 @ 05:42:46 PM in AEST
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I meant to write a poem to you
so my evil tongue won't spill unwilling snakes of tangles anger
but now my pen can't write but truth:
my person is broken, my eyes are sore
I remember a time where I wanted no more
I lost hope that wonders exist
I forgot the time where I thought they did
I wish I could live,
but I can only kill
I wish I could think,
but I feel so ill
I wanted to write beautiful lines for you
of how you're the person I owe my life to
of how all joy I know has been through your eyes
of the day I met you, the day of surprise
Above all I'd like to write about how we are now
I'd like to say we are fine
and how I make you smile
I'd write beautiful lines
of our days and our nights
and the sounds and the sights
of our times without bounds
Of the air that we breathe
and the look in our eyes
of the emotions we share
of how our promises shine
Instead as I lay a pen, I speak of destruction
of the pain I inflict, of death and disruption
my soul is imprisoned in a body of hatred
my thoughts are corrupted by the darkness embedded
I wake becomes sleepless living
haunted by meandering dreams
of a day without breathing
of a moment of peace
days become months, and months become years
time goes by, I'm still shedding tears
I have not written
but merely in prose
I have not given
but bags of stones
I have not eaten
but I've often choked
I have not slept
but maybe I've dozed
Copyright ©
Luzinha
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2012-03-24 17:42:46]
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Re: Beautiful Lines
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by Luzinha on
Saturday, 24th March 2012 @ 06:59:43 PM AEST
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| any comments are welcomed. it's not my best piece of writing in terms of style, but I haven't written for months because of the depressive state I'm in and it's the first thing I've jotted some lines in a while... I just needed to express my feelings... I feel a bit relieved :-) |
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Re: Beautiful Lines
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by Luzinha on
Saturday, 24th March 2012 @ 07:06:23 PM AEST
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| sorry I just noticed certain mistakes, mainly it should be tangled instead of tangles, and 'My Wake' instead of I wake |
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Re: Beautiful Lines
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by shereal_14 on
Saturday, 24th March 2012 @ 07:23:23 PM AEST
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| The beginning of this is a little confusing, but I actually enjoyed reading the rest of this. Good work. You say it isn't your best, but it's actually pretty good work. |
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