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I am a hypocrite
Contributed by
Jilli_Bean
on
Wednesday, 7th May 2003 @ 05:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Do you know how it feels
feels for the sun not to shine
....you know...
just to burn out....
or the starss....
to quickly fade....
what if the grass just wasnt green
or the sky, the same blue
...and ....
you know you wouldn't like that
...for them to just "leave"
but if they can't ...just ..."leave"
...why should you?
think about it
A steady balance
why go before its time
and ....next time you see white grass ..
"leave"...
its your time...
A cycle is a cycle for a reason
...it works....
get used to it
everyone else has
Copyright ©
Jilli_Bean
... [
2003-05-07 05:35:00]
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Re: I am a hypocrite
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by venkat on
Thursday, 8th May 2003 @ 04:50:25 AM AEST
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| truly I can't make out much...yet i feel ' 'why go before its time' seems the message in the poem.. venkat |
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Re: I am a hypocrite
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by Apartment213 on
Thursday, 8th May 2003 @ 10:23:19 PM AEST
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| great poem i love this thinking u should tell the world about this poem |
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Re: I am a hypocrite
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by stargazer on
Thursday, 15th May 2003 @ 04:28:37 PM AEST
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A cycle is a cycle- so true. Very optimistic Jill... its good to see you venture out there. You know.
I loved it... very true and very.... real to life.
Amy |
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