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The Early Warning
Contributed by
TheSimpleton
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Monday, 2nd April 2012 @ 03:13:33 PM in AEST
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oops
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The Early Warning
by Ryan Chandler
I sought to find a new design
by putting poison in my spine
and when I crossed the very line
that I had drawn inside my mind
the place I found was not divine
it did not shimmer
it did not shine
it simply showed me that my time
was oh' so precious and so fine.
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TheSimpleton
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2012-04-02 15:13:33]
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Re: The Early Warning
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by deusdeira on
Monday, 2nd April 2012 @ 06:23:50 PM AEST
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| are you talking about surgery by chance? I'm curious. I liked the poem. Short but sweet. |
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