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Miss You
Contributed by
dvtpdw
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Wednesday, 4th April 2012 @ 02:04:43 PM in AEST
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Went to reach for the phone today
My head filled with words to say
Took several seconds to remember
She died on the 12th of November
My heart went crashing once again
I miss her terribly, my best friend
Can't believe that she's really gone
Suppose to be here where she belongs
Miss the sound your smiles would make
Miss sharing the pictures we'd alway take
Miss the way you'd make my pain go away
Miss how you'd explain that life would be okay
I see in my heart the golden wings you wear
Your face in Love's light, your smile you share
It was your time, yet you left us far too soon
I miss you so much, yet hear you sing Love's tune
I'll see you again someday, this my anchor
I'll save the stories, remember the pictures
We'll laugh, talk, and dance together
Side by side, best friends forever
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Re: Miss You
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by ShaeBay on
Wednesday, 4th April 2012 @ 02:38:24 PM AEST
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| This poem was beautiful. I once lost a friend and it hurts to know they aren't here. But as your poem ended you made it clear that there will be the day when we're all united again. Lovely poem! |
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Re: Miss You
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by Bookgoddess on
Wednesday, 4th April 2012 @ 04:51:18 PM AEST
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| Tears sprang to my eyes after only a few lines. But the hope you shared in that last bit of seeing her again kept them from falling. Wonderful write, I'm so glad you shared this one. |
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Re: Miss You
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 4th April 2012 @ 04:58:42 PM AEST
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Fantastic heart and soul.
it's hard to find words to do this write justice.
This write can only bring healing to all.
Beautiful work,
Big huggs, blessings,
emy |
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Re: Miss You
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by Avataar on
Friday, 13th April 2012 @ 01:15:45 PM AEST
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| A truly heart felt write...in all our pain we hold on to hope....hope is life... |
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Re: Miss You
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by LauranHyde on
Wednesday, 25th July 2012 @ 02:21:57 AM AEST
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This is beautiful, I'm so sorry for your loss.
Truly a great write. |
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