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l'Affaire
Contributed by
Karlee14
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Thursday, 5th April 2012 @ 01:46:57 AM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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Forgive me Father for I have sinned Walked into the flames And I am pinned Should I be ashamed?
The fire in his eyes My head is spinning The desire in mine If it's a game he's winning.
Ecstacy builds between my legs "Sweet Jesus" I'll scream "Don't stop" I'll beg My eyes are beaming.
Throw me around like mop Ram me against a rough wall I'll keep coming back like a lost pup At your beckoning call.
Sitting all alone I won't escape Even now I realise my moral decay Should be so ashamed as if it's rape Rattling around in my head on replay.
Help me Father I've done wrong Smirk on his face almost dismember'd Greedy hands pulling down my thong "Be all my sins remember'd".
Copyright ©
Karlee14
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2012-04-05 01:46:57] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: l'Affaire
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Thursday, 5th April 2012 @ 12:08:53 PM AEST (User
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Bless you my child.
Say ten hail marys and five our fathers, then take a very very ice cold shower.
Okay, maybe I should do that just for reading this. Damn, it's hot in here.
Rides the poem right on outa here.
Awesome read ! ! !
Thank you,
Tim |
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Re: l'Affaire
(User Rating: 1 ) by thehotshotpoet on
Thursday, 5th April 2012 @ 07:22:08 PM AEST (User
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if i did'nt see where you said differently i'd say thats rape
your wording was great but i was a bit confused with you giving yourself so easily thanks for the read keep up the good work
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Re: l'Affaire
(User Rating: 1 ) by Poemkid on
Wednesday, 2nd May 2012 @ 01:21:48 PM AEST (User
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Great writing, so emotional.
-PK |
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