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Tomb of love
Contributed by
thehotshotpoet
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Friday, 6th April 2012 @ 01:54:48 PM in AEST
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There is a little place, I call the tomb of love, it takes away reality, & what dream's are all made of, dream's turn to nightmares, & memories to hate, for that your being judged, now what will be your fate, a simple life of misery, where nothing turns out right, you no longer have a special one, that use to hold you tight, what use4 to make you smile, has been takin from your life, what use to be so precious, is now your x-wife, the total dissapearance, of what dream's are all made of, if these word's describe you, your in the tomb of love, the hot shot poet
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Re: Tomb of love
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by northernlights on
Saturday, 7th April 2012 @ 01:35:02 AM AEST
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| I like the concept of a tomb of love,for which you have described all those who reside within it.A relatable write for many,therefore a connection and what poetry is all about. |
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