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A Star That Fell
Contributed by
jockphillips
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Friday, 6th April 2012 @ 01:56:24 PM in AEST
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And then it fell
Having a time preceding it
During which it had not
The lights flicker down on Earth here
The grass field is dark too but still there
Someone saw it happen or perhaps multiple people
We know that it provoked at least one thought
When will the night know also
That a fate so cruel befell one of its own
A bright star
A star that was not fallen
And then it fell too
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2012-04-06 13:56:24]
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Re: A Star That Fell
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by WilliamButlerSkates on
Friday, 6th April 2012 @ 01:58:54 PM AEST
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| I don't understand this one. Is it not about ranch? Oh, wait. It's supposed to be read upside down! |
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Re: A Star That Fell
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by thehotshotpoet on
Friday, 6th April 2012 @ 06:13:09 PM AEST
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good write thanks for sharing
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