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open your eye's
Contributed by
thehotshotpoet
on
Saturday, 7th April 2012 @ 04:30:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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you'd fallow him threw anything
threw tragedy & pain
to hope he takes you seriously
& not take your words in vein
you surrender all that you believe
to show him that it's real
overlooking the most important part
just how he made you feel
he critisizes with out reason
not caring what he's done
the hurt is not within him
you're the only one
your feelings they are radical
like an animal going wild
but your heart is like a toy
& to him you are a child
he plays with your emotion's
no matter what you do
he could care less what you're feeling
because it's only hurting you the hot shot poet
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2012-04-07 16:30:36]
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Re: open your eye's
(User Rating: 1 )
by HIV on
Sunday, 8th April 2012 @ 06:14:25 PM AEST
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Inspirational writings like yours makes me feel like im not the only person out there.
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