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sanity & dreams
Contributed by
thehotshotpoet
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Wednesday, 11th April 2012 @ 02:59:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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I dreamed I was standing
in a mythical place we seem to call cloud nine
then suddenly the cloud was gone
but I was left behind
I hope that was'nt my paradise
because it left me standing still
with noone to speak to but myself
I hope this is'nt free will
If it is it's turn around
it's backed me in a hole
it tries to take all that I am
but it connot touch my soul
it could offer me the riches of anyman
it still would'nt help them out
that part of me stays with me
it's mine with out a doupt
so come on you beast of sanity
try with all your might
as long as I believe you cannot win
this I know is right
believers are winners
& winners believe
this can't be taken away
it's been around before my time
& untill my dying day
the hot shot poet
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2012-04-11 14:59:05]
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Re: sanity & dreams
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by Katelynash on
Wednesday, 11th April 2012 @ 10:11:39 PM AEST
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| The poem itself is good, but there are many spelling and grammar mistakes making it difficult and irritating to read. |
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