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Psyberdelic soup
Contributed by
dovinmelhee
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Friday, 13th April 2012 @ 05:04:42 PM in AEST
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"Psyberdelic soup," sayeth the oozing cube.
The memory stratum embeds evil frequencies,
so that the unseen gateways do exhale squirming hordes.
In 12 milliseconds, the luminous nanoparticles will propagate contagious mutant insectoids.
Formidable protocols from Mars do populate the data excretions with tachyons,
which doth spontaneously seek video vectors.
The corporation sayeth, "if trautonium parasites neutralize, then seeping souls do incubate."
Squirming wires of antiquity miraculously fuse with aether fields,
then information packets eternally drink.
"Ultra-violet neural glitch," sayeth the irregular protoplast.
If spherical gateways exhale complexities, then who will modulate zeta zombies?
A few blobular-clusters could bubble with nitrates to insanely process twitching light-years,
to dismally disembowel neurotronic sensors, and emanate within sizzling conduits.
-- Dovin Melhee
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Re: Psyberdelic soup
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by doug on
Saturday, 14th April 2012 @ 10:44:34 AM AEST
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| I can't pretend this did'nt go a bit over my head. What I gather is that something is happening and something else is preparing to do something about it. lol. This is completely unlike anything else I've ever read on here and that's great. You have a mind that is original and able to come up with complex and fantastical notions. However , I am reminded of many tv shows and bands that were complex and ingenious. Although they were awesome and original they often had trouble finding an audience because the general public was unable to process and thus appreciate them. I've , at times , been tempted to use obscure wording in my poems and found that the comments I recieved dropped in response. Sad but true. Does'nt mean your not talented .... you are. Keep up the great writings truly , doug |
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