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Coming for you
Contributed by
HIV
on
Sunday, 15th April 2012 @ 12:54:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Warm glance,Fake smile
Eyes meet,Your mind runs wild
This game you play with me,
I like it in a way
You expect to grab a child
You think I'm innocent not wild
Take me,let's see how much I'm tame...
I Wish I Could Take Control!
I Wish I Could Let Go!
I Wish I Could Break This Hold!
Inside I'm So Cold!
I'm coming,I'm coming,I'm coming for you
I'm coming,I'm coming,I'm coming for you...
Warm lips,Big smile
Hatred runs through my insides
This game you play with me
intimidation grows each day
Rough hands,Narrowed eyes
Looking for me as I run and hide
pain grows each time we play...
I Wish I Could Take Control!
I Wish I Could Let Go!
I Wish I Could Break This Hold!
Inside I'm So Cold!
I'm coming,I'm coming,I'm coming for you
I'm coming,I'm coming,I'm coming for you...
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HIV
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Re: Coming for you
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by doug on
Monday, 16th April 2012 @ 12:28:16 PM AEST
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| Interesting. Leaves some to the imagination as to what is happening though it's clearly something that is or rather becomes unpleasant by the second half of the poem. Do keep writing. truly , doug |
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Re: Coming for you
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 17th April 2012 @ 03:03:05 AM AEST
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Yes I agree with Doug, this brings the reader into it, you write it in a way that leaves us all hanging on the edge. Nice work.
Michelle |
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