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the divorce
Contributed by
thehotshotpoetprincess
on
Monday, 16th April 2012 @ 03:25:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I get up they start yelling
I go to my room,my dog check's on me
I walk back up stair's,I'm told to pack my thing's
I start crying,Mom does'nt care
Dad look's at me say's I will miss you
I was drug away,mom's cussin
I'm ignoring,pretending I was with daddy
Mom get's to grandma's,I go to grandma's bed
I went to sleep,Mom does'nt even realize
grandma comes in and wispers,
"I'm sorry baby, for tonight. I'll take you in tomorrow."
The Hot Shot Poet's Princess.
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thehotshotpoetprincess
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2012-04-16 15:25:04]
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Re: the divorce
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 17th April 2012 @ 02:57:34 AM AEST
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deep expression here. I went through alot of this when I was little so I get what you are saying here. I hope everything works out well for all of you:)
Michelle |
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Re: the divorce
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by doug on
Tuesday, 17th April 2012 @ 03:46:33 PM AEST
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| I like this. It's like a slice of life type of poem. It held my interest so that I had to see what was going to happen. Nice work.... seriously wondering though... is it all girls or did your dad ever have any boys? Four... is a lotta daughters. lol. take care , truly , Doug |
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Re: the divorce
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by thehotshotpoet on
Monday, 22nd February 2016 @ 07:11:53 AM AEST
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| yes my dear you are for sure one of my daughters,,i love you |
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