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To Dionysos
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me
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Wednesday, 7th May 2003 @ 08:35:00 PM in AEST
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I will use an extended metaphor
A clever device chosen to disguise
true meanings
I will speak in verse
Hoping that only the chosen ones
will trully understand
And yet I will not lie
I drink and I get dizzy
I am filled with every sound
and sight and smell
Every touch excites me
The taste consumes me
And yet I am consuming taste
I walk
But rather, I stumble
And every step is an adventure
Because I am filled
and frenzied with the drink
I slowly learn my limits
I can only sip a little
of the sacred liquid at once
And when it's filled me
and changed me,
and once I stumble
and regain my balance,
I am ready for another taste
But when finally the trance of drink
has left me,
and I have a minute to recooperate
Insightfully I think of my adventures
and learn and prepare for next time.
Copyright ©
me
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2003-05-07 20:35:00]
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Re: To Dionysos
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by norm on
Thursday, 29th May 2003 @ 08:09:14 AM AEST
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it is so good...i don't think you desired
what occurred..you created a charming
poem. it warns me of nothing and makes
me want to imbibe. goody |
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Re: To Dionysos
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by Fenril(_a.k.a_ZTAP) on
Saturday, 31st May 2003 @ 01:38:50 PM AEST
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| Hail Dionysos, one of my fav Greek Gods, well after Aphrodita, but anyway, let's all drink to celebrate this piece of art |
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Re: To Dionysos
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 8th October 2003 @ 09:56:52 AM AEST
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perhaps we should use this metaphor to demonstrate your state of mind all the time.. hahah
no but seriously.. clever! ..
sweet! ;)
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