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your sin is real!
Contributed by
me
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Wednesday, 7th May 2003 @ 10:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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you want to be caught don't you? you want to be accused
you want somebody to know your sins and throw them in your face
you want somebody to acknowledge that you're real
you want to be accused you want it to be proven that you really do exist not as a fictional character
because real people don't get away with everything they have to face responsibility they have consequences and lies are always revealed in real life
but in your soap opera the temptress the vilainess lies constantly and although everyone knows she's always allowed to continue her scams your scams
only the person who will name your sins and hold you responsible can make you real
until then you're fictitious you're a dream a vision a piece of living, breathing art and yet even art has to have at least one flaw to be real and you're not
in your mind you see that until you're made to face your sins you will continue in your non-existence and so you're begging, and pleading and needing someone to make you real
am i mistaken?
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2003-05-07 22:05:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: your sin is real!
(User Rating: 1 ) by Fenril(_a.k.a_ZTAP) on
Saturday, 31st May 2003 @ 01:35:38 PM AEST (User
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It's scary, the person you describe in this poerm, I used to know someone like her, I really enjoyed this writing, it made me remeber her |
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