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Encounter
Contributed by
northernlights
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Saturday, 21st April 2012 @ 03:05:10 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Natures
Meeting ground levels the playing field
Where scorpions happen to dance.
And dance we do with a sting in our tail!
Voices of venom spit with smiles of theatrical perfection.
Painted faces of society spread connection propaganda,
And muscles flex with snide quips, an embrace of liquid
Habitual demonstration, as viper for a secondary moment
Uncoils to sense presence, use ,possibility of satisfaction
Uncertainty hangs in the silence broken only by gentle
Hissing of the aftermath of encounter
And Society slides home
Copyright ©
northernlights
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2012-04-21 03:05:10]
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Re: Encounter
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by thehotshotpoet on
Saturday, 21st April 2012 @ 06:57:33 AM AEST
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nice write thanks for sharing
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Re: Encounter
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 21st April 2012 @ 11:08:00 AM AEST
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Those damn Scorpios. Always stinging. Of course one my best friends is a Scorpio.
Someone's always trying to sell us the hype, are they not? But then we can come to YPDC and escape all that crap and read great poems like yours making statements about all their rubbish.
Real people, that's what I like.
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Re: Encounter
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 22nd April 2012 @ 07:41:26 AM AEST
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Every time I read one of your poems I'm struck by something different and amazing in your writing. This one is no exception (though it is exceptional).
Cheers,
Mickey. |
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Re: Encounter
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by spud on
Tuesday, 24th April 2012 @ 07:12:45 AM AEST
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Hi Anna,
Your usual standard of excellence in this very
thought-provoking piece of verse.
Well said.
Tommy
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