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Am I wrong?? Read to see please.
Contributed by
thehotshotpoet
on
Sunday, 22nd April 2012 @ 11:28:06 AM in AEST
Topic:
hbadday
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Do I write so bad
are the word's not their
do they not make since
are they worthy to share
opinion's are important
very much to me
when you read my poems
can you feel what I see
I've done this so long
I've never thought twice
is what I'm writing junk
or is any of it nice
when it was brought to my attention
of all the things I do
are being done completely wrong
& my writing sucks too
well that got my attention
I thought she may be right
so I decided that I'd write this
maybe get a responce tonight
I know I'm far from perfect
something I've never tried to be
all I ever wanted
was just to be me
I have a little place in mind
it's not so far away
& maybe if I do it right
I'll get there some day
It's simply writing poetry
saying what is true
hoping people read it
& maybe feel it to
it all comes from the heart
it's the only way we show it
I thank you for reading this
from the hot shot poet
Copyright ©
thehotshotpoet
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2012-04-22 11:28:06]
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Re: Am I wrong?? Read to see please.
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by Waynster on
Sunday, 22nd April 2012 @ 02:17:22 PM AEST
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I read your poem and it is the style what i write. Your words blend and make sense! Nothing to worry about. Although, i would divide the stanzas to keep each set of four sentences separate. This seems to be your style. All in all, your doing a great job, keep it up!
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Re: Am I wrong?? Read to see please.
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by Kailas on
Sunday, 22nd April 2012 @ 02:18:34 PM AEST
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| All of your poetry is so good and you should never doubt yourself :P |
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Re: Am I wrong?? Read to see please.
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by LetYourFeelingsOut on
Monday, 23rd April 2012 @ 10:40:28 AM AEST
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| I love how the words blend into each other :) Best peom i read out of yours soooo far !!! |
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Re: Am I wrong?? Read to see please.
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by ShaeBay on
Monday, 23rd April 2012 @ 02:51:03 PM AEST
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I have always enjoyed your poems. No need to change a thing. Watch some grammar but otherwise never doubt yourself. Go with the flow as I used to say :)
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Re: Am I wrong?? Read to see please.
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by TCK on
Sunday, 29th April 2012 @ 02:10:45 PM AEST
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As the others said, you write excellent poetry, don't doubt yourself. Sometimes it feels a little mass produced, just because of the sheer bulk of it, and your spelling and grammar could use improvement, but its obvious you have flow and a lot of talent, so really, keep it up.
Amazing work,
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