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It's Me, only it you?
Contributed by
scott_milton
on
Thursday, 8th May 2003 @ 12:45:00 AM in AEST
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What a broken animal out it's plastic wrapping!"
Draped in mountainous appliances, that God
Spat the earth oneless.
And for a minute everyone made examples of themselves -
Killing witches.
Selling used cars.
Musing out the most extensible thraldom.
(Out the hill edge of his brow - "Why are we here?"
I could not answer...
He took my hand away, tossed it in the ocean
And in sardonic heaps we both realised.
He was completely insane.
Cackling as he crazed
Back up into the microwave shrubbery,
Each step roaring of mechanical bust.
I stared ridiculously at his cape; television screens,
People and twirling techno-stardust slinked back into its seams,
Slighting at my eyes.
"Who began it all with air?" He pointed.
"Who moves this light to here?" He pointed.
"Who could possibly stand over all your idiosyncrasies?" He pointed.
"I'm no good-hearted pirate above the sky? I've a ***** business
To run. So get back to work."
He pointed at the stars.
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Re: It's Me, only it you?
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 18th May 2003 @ 09:49:13 AM AEST
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| My lord man, what a twisted sister you are.
If this is poetry then something dreadful has happened. My suggestion is to write from the HEART, not the DICTIONARY.
This is pure rot. |
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Re: It's Me, only it you?
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by scott_milton on
Sunday, 18th May 2003 @ 10:28:22 PM AEST
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hahaha!
Obviously you can only comprehend the paper thin ideals of more simpler poetry. The imagery I used here is an exaggerated view of a techno-organic god that I feel exists in this new age and his views on the worldly happenings.
This idea of only 'writing from the heart' is a limit you need to break. Go read my other poem Write one about me theres a bit of heart in that. |
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Re: It's Me, only it you?
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by scott_milton on
Wednesday, 11th June 2003 @ 05:30:58 AM AEST
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hahaha!
Obviously you can only comprehend the paper thin ideals of more simpler poetry. The imagery I used here is an exaggerated view of a techno-organic god that I feel exists in this new age and his views on the worldly happenings.
This idea of only 'writing from the heart' is a limit you need to break. Go read my other poem Write one about me theres a bit of heart in that. |
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