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seismic. . .
Contributed by
elle
on
Tuesday, 24th April 2012 @ 07:18:47 AM in AEST
Topic:
dedicatedpoems
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deniably
we balance
our differences
glare out from scowling brow
vibrations
of discontent
mask insufferable laspes
of memory
when. . .
did we move
on. . .
Copyright ©
elle
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2012-04-24 07:18:47] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: seismic. . .
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 24th April 2012 @ 06:29:47 PM AEST (User
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Yours is far superior. |
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Re: seismic. . .
(User Rating: 1 ) by Breezy on
Wednesday, 25th April 2012 @ 12:23:18 PM AEST (User
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Seismic indeed!!
elle .. I've missed your work and one read of this
is clear enough reason why. You evoke severe
emotion in so few words. it's incredible. Poetic.
Amazed, I remain.
~ Breezy
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Re: seismic. . .
(User Rating: 1 ) by Raggie on
Wednesday, 25th April 2012 @ 01:05:46 PM AEST (User
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I really enjoyed the vivid delivery. Glad I didn't miss out on your poem:) |
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Re: seismic. . .
(User Rating: 1 ) by spud on
Thursday, 26th April 2012 @ 08:48:36 AM AEST (User
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Hi Elle,
When the heart speaks, Truth is secured!
Beautiful!
On the richter scale 1 to 10 .......... 9
(only because no-one is perfect).
Tommy
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