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Slow sand
Contributed by
Angelfox
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Tuesday, 24th April 2012 @ 12:22:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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Hopeless romantic
with no hope.
Cursed
but with no curse there would be
no words
just sweet somethings
that were really nothings
that were only sometimes really heard
Can't sleep
dreams become just winks
Eyes that were once full of blithe
are now restless full of dim
Glass filled waterless sand,
souless island in the middle of
nowhere land and still...
waves neglect to take away
the past.
Copyright ©
Angelfox
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2012-04-24 12:22:42]
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Re: Slow sand
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by desciple on
Tuesday, 24th April 2012 @ 02:04:54 PM AEST
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| Deep..simply deep, great write |
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Re: Slow sand
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by deusdeira on
Friday, 22nd June 2012 @ 06:08:27 PM AEST
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| I LOVE this poem. So much truth within your beautiful magic of words! I especially love how you call yourself a hopeless romantic without hope. I have often felt like the world has turned its back on me, and yet... I cannot help my nature. I want to create something beautiful. Whether it is writing... or a relationship, or a simple footprint in the sand, I find romance in everything. |
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