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The fog
Contributed by
LetYourFeelingsOut
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Tuesday, 24th April 2012 @ 06:39:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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The dark sky hides the sun
The darkness has begun
The fog gets thicker its hard to see
Something moves behind me
I start to run, I cant breath
Signs are reilly hard to read
You try and break free, Your bodys frozen
You cannot move , your stuck in the moment
Fear and regret fill your mind
Pray, Pray until your found
Someone will notice that you arent there
They will try and find you
It will end if you beleve
You wake up it was just a bad dream ......
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2012-04-24 18:39:36]
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Re: The fog
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by desciple on
Wednesday, 25th April 2012 @ 12:13:57 AM AEST
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Re: The fog
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by ShaeBay on
Thursday, 26th April 2012 @ 02:43:58 PM AEST
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This was a suspenseful piece and I truly enjoyed how it was short but very delightful to read. Its almost, in my opinion, it's worse to wake up not knowing the end of the dream because it might just replay and replay again for a long time.
Very inspiring and enjoyable,
Shae |
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