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Father
Contributed by
HJShreeve
on
Wednesday, 25th April 2012 @ 03:44:35 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Father, Listen,
Did life not turm put as you had planned?
The grass not greener, Your rivers dammed?
How was it, that you wound up here?
Moved by hate, Consumed in fear.
Father, Listen,
As I go grey, I wonder will I die this way?
A life of waste, To dwell on rage,
You won't find peace, at your old age!
Father, Listen,
I feared you as a child,
Your unkind temper, It made me wild,
I know my Mother is hard to please,
This sad existence, Now my disease.
Father, Listen,
For just once to me,
The apple, It does, Fall close to tree,
I dead the things that I have learnt,
My wells now dry, My bridges, Burnt.
Father, Listen,
Just come and see,
Just how much I am like thee,
I think I'll rest, Just for a while,
For just one more hour, In denial
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Re: Father
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by ShaeBay on
Wednesday, 25th April 2012 @ 09:21:45 AM AEST
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This poem.. This poem was completely tearing at my heart the whole time. I have seen and felt very similar emotions. This was a great piece and I hope these emotions continue in all of your future writing. There was great use of words and all of the emotions completely pulled me in as a reader.
Very great write, and I hope this person stays strong, and remembers, we all can shape a new path.
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