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LET'S NOT DODDLE
Contributed by
hray42
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Wednesday, 25th April 2012 @ 04:28:36 PM in AEST
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my head is swirling like the water in a rotating fishbowl
i am beginning to be confused, and mistakes have taken their toll
i look toward my future, and see casualties all around
i know i must leave, and head for some kind of higher ground
i cannot fix what i have not yet come to understand
will you please give me direction, or at least a helping hand?
problems have been the most rampant of my hurdles of late
if i cannot solve them today, will it be possible at a slightly later date?
i will not ask you for anything else just now my friend
for i do know that i am shattered to a point beyond ammend
i would like to say a good thank you for your all too precious time
i need to say goodbye now, for endless doddle is such a nasty crime...
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hray42
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2012-04-25 16:28:36]
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Re: LET'S NOT DODDLE
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by emystar on
Thursday, 6th December 2012 @ 08:40:26 PM AEST
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Another good write.
Blessings,
emy
Did any one ever tell you that you look like
Billy Bob Thorton? That' s a good thing. |
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