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Crawl Inside
Contributed by
Marrs
on
Wednesday, 25th April 2012 @ 10:43:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
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maybe its better, to writhe and wiggle on the hook slither beneath leaves and old dirt to be out of sight and out of mind perhaps its more grand to be the bugs beneath boulders or one of those creepy crawlies that keep poison in the tips of their tails just to sting you as they run away the likes of serpents in vines and crows on power lines they may be liked better than those that battle their fears head on, that dont lurk in the dark it could be much more honorable to be the flea living off of someone elses vitality to be like that of the supposed disguised those ones that keep up the face and lies to try and be vicious when you've already moved on perhaps, it could, maybe, oh these could be the things one strives to be but fact of the matter is, these things are beneath me.
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Re: Crawl Inside
(User Rating: 1 ) by Raggie on
Thursday, 26th April 2012 @ 10:11:10 AM AEST (User
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Fantastic. I was nodding my head and saying 'yeah, yeah' all the way through it. That's the thing with good poetry, like yours, it draws one in and makes one's heart pound. Thank you:) |
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