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Red-haired Trifling *****
Contributed by
dalecooper
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Friday, 27th April 2012 @ 03:10:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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she walks out the station leans on the wall and waits for him
lights a cigarette checks her lips in the mirror outlines the red lips till they get in place trying to believe in her beauty to be pretty enough for him
he doesn't show up but he sends her a text ''come where we met''
then she walks down the street (body shaking) lights another cigarette and talks to herself: ''pretend everything's in order'' you, disturbed *****
she's weird, more weird than he thought she'd be too complicated for him
finally, they meet and kiss gingerly she puts spaces in between to believe she's not hooked with him anyhow, she will get kicked out eventually
how long lasts the path of sadness and despair it takes a very long time to settle down, eh?
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dalecooper
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2012-04-27 15:10:23] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Red-haired Trifling *****
(User Rating: 1 ) by thehotshotpoet on
Saturday, 28th April 2012 @ 08:32:24 AM AEST (User
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good write thanks for sharing
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Re: Red-haired Trifling *****
(User Rating: 1 ) by richard2 on
Saturday, 28th April 2012 @ 04:44:34 PM AEST (User
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Interesting writing, where is pair going to end up? a question which has been asked forever. The poem certainly captured my interest. Write more and keep the narrative going.
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