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Photograph
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Anonymous494
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Monday, 30th April 2012 @ 02:31:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Shes got my eyes.
Shes got my smile.
Shes everything that I strive to be,
And everything Im not.
That girl no longer exists; shes no more than a photograph.
She has my personalized necklace, my favorite outfit.
Her hair: the perfect shade of dark auburn.
That look on her face, so happy.
How is it that that girl could possibly have been me?
Forever seventeen, this girl is no more than a photograph.
Never the object of attention,
But gorgeous just the same.
Never the popular one,
No, she doesnt want the fame.
Her beauty will forever be preserved, but now shes no more than a photograph.
As every day I stare at this gorgeous face, I wonder:
Will I ever be this girl again?
This world has tried to break me,
But still I live on.
I take it day it day by day, hoping for more than just some photograph.
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Re: Photograph
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by thehotshotpoet on
Monday, 30th April 2012 @ 06:36:27 PM AEST
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may I please say that girl will always be,no matter how old you are now the heart stays with you,it's always yours & only yours ,please remember that.thanks for sharing
the hot shot poet |
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Re: Photograph
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by gypsymaddness on
Monday, 30th April 2012 @ 07:27:13 PM AEST
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| I find this heartbreaking. Its you. You may not look like the same person, but you are still you. Moving, and nestalgic, this is like a fine wine. You know how wine is. The longer it is, the better. Great poem, and thanks for sharing it :-) |
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Re: Photograph
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by desciple on
Thursday, 3rd May 2012 @ 10:38:48 PM AEST
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Time changes as we do, but the inner soul of a person will always remain the same. Young at heart and mind,
Is how we will always remember ourselves. Thank you for sharing, I love your style...great write:) |
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Re: Photograph
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by NatashaSutherland on
Tuesday, 15th May 2012 @ 07:33:09 PM AEST
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| Very meaningful words, I love how you've reached right into your emotions to really make the reader feel what your trying to say! Love your style! |
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