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Rebirth of the Rose
Contributed by
thehotshotpoet
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Monday, 30th April 2012 @ 06:27:22 PM in AEST
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A Rose has a beauty
in the form that it takes
the Petals come together
creating the awesome look it makes
although it isn't Magical
I have to think like this
The Rain makes it grow
The sun gives it beauty simply with a kiss
They do not last forever
although I believe that they try
but for a new Rose to take its place
The Rose must wilt & die
That would be the power
& the beauty from within
one must give up it's life
for the new life to begin
They really are so beautiful
with each & every pose
so no matter what the form is
it is still a Rose
the hot shot poet
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Re: Rebirth of the Rose
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by gypsymaddness on
Monday, 30th April 2012 @ 07:11:28 PM AEST
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| I thought it was beautiful in it's simplicity. Well written :-) |
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Re: Rebirth of the Rose
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by ShaeBay on
Tuesday, 1st May 2012 @ 03:55:23 PM AEST
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I like it :) The description of the rose's cycle was right on.
Well written,
Shae |
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Re: Rebirth of the Rose
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by JamesStockdale on
Tuesday, 4th August 2015 @ 02:11:46 PM AEST
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Nice!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I like it!
James |
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