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Roses the perfect centerpiece
Contributed by
thehotshotpoet
on
Monday, 30th April 2012 @ 06:31:57 PM in AEST
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in the center of the table
it takes your breath away
as its aroma fills the room
this beautiful bouquet
you put an aspirin in
to extend the life it lives
& to extend the fresh aroma
a Rose can only give
from the moment that it's clipped
preservation must start
it is how we extend the life
of the Rose's heart
once the Rose has wilted
the petals began to fall
The Rose has shown its beauty
to one & all
no plant shows more passion
in the way it takes a pose
nothing comes close to its power
in the beauty of the Rose
the hot shot poet
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Re: Roses the perfect centerpiece
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by gypsymaddness on
Monday, 30th April 2012 @ 07:18:43 PM AEST
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| The first one was good. The second one wonderful, and this one is brilliantly written. Lovely and delicate. Really good :-) |
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Re: Roses the perfect centerpiece
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by ShaeBay on
Tuesday, 1st May 2012 @ 03:59:26 PM AEST
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Thnis one really tied in well :) I think you completed this challenge with a breeze!
Thank you for the lovely poems
Shae |
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