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Scars
Contributed by
iodinelove
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Wednesday, 2nd May 2012 @ 10:27:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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As a child, I would sit at the faade of a crumbling brick wall.
I would stare out across the vacant face of an airstrip and dream.
The dreams I dreamed then have passed.
In the turmoil of life, I have forgotten them.
In my heart I know
The dreams I dreamed were beautiful.
The simple scars of time.
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iodinelove
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2012-05-02 22:27:30]
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Re: Scars
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by Me1234 on
Saturday, 5th May 2012 @ 11:16:32 AM AEST
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Short but excellent!
Well done :D |
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Re: Scars
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 15th July 2012 @ 02:33:47 AM AEST
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"Wounds may heal and pain relieved but scars remain with youthful zeal"
I love the last 2 line. Poetic. I've read through your poems and although I haven't commented on all of them I think you a talented poet |
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