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The room
Contributed by
iodinelove
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Friday, 11th May 2012 @ 01:28:25 AM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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In a room
The edge of a thought
Stopped at the arrival of the room
The room became a room in thought
The room was set down
The white screen
An I as a crown
The shadow unseen
A slower pace now
A soft sublime
A curtsy or bow
A Simple rhyme
To lift with fancier lace
The thought of another space
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iodinelove
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2012-05-11 01:28:25]
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Re: The room
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Friday, 11th May 2012 @ 02:13:25 AM AEST
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| I like it and hell, you used the word "curtsy" so that was pretty cool too. :) |
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