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Longing To Breathe
Contributed by
CARAAAAA
on
Friday, 11th May 2012 @ 06:47:10 AM in AEST
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Give me a body of water
so pure and crystalline.
I don't care
how minute or infinite,
I'll contort any aspiration.
Just give me that
cool, translucent water
where I can glide effortlessly
with my eyes wide open,
no murkiness welling up
my vision with warm tears,
drowning a deadweight of brittle clay
in molten fear.
Give me a body of water
so unadulterated
that I can audaciously traverse
any wave,
afloat
with sand, rocks and shell
grazing my taut,impervious exterior,
washing up
on the shores of liberation,
breathing through bubbles
of clarity.
Copyright ©
CARAAAAA
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2012-05-11 06:47:10]
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Re: Longing To Breathe
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by dvtpdw on
Friday, 11th May 2012 @ 07:38:06 AM AEST
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| This is filled with bright imagery, and hidden comment. I liked the flow and the emotion it pulled. Great write. Thank you for sharing. P |
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