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If you were me
Contributed by
banjosandwitch
on
Friday, 11th May 2012 @ 07:31:49 AM in AEST
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If you were me
I wish you could be cool like me
Funky fresh with cool poetry
A mind that is positronic
Not smoking to much hydroponics
Solving problems like the doctors sonic
Logic, two steps ahead of the game
Infamous not famous
Known by many, hated by few
Some days you wish you were me
Some days I wish you were too
So when you balls it up
So when I have to say you are thick
I wouldnt have forgot that
I wouldnt have too
If you were me
You wouldnt make the mistakes, only you can do
By banjosandwitch 03/05/12
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Re: If you were me
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by dvtpdw on
Friday, 11th May 2012 @ 07:36:07 AM AEST
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| Very interesting play with words. Makes the mind go one way, then swiftly takes it another. Nice write - I quite enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing. P |
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Re: If you were me
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by thehotshotpoet on
Friday, 11th May 2012 @ 10:13:26 AM AEST
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well banjo if I were you I would'nt be thanking you for sharing this with us nice work my friend,oh be easy on the hydro,lol
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Re: If you were me
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by Facade on
Tuesday, 15th May 2012 @ 01:43:13 AM AEST
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| Poet thug. Fun read |
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