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Many Shades Ago
Contributed by
CARAAAAA
on
Saturday, 12th May 2012 @ 03:42:25 AM in AEST
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There was a time
where the blessed mind
navigated boundless exploration,
and then it climbed
into a ravine
and got trapped
like a festering curse.
Brilliantly multicoloured kites
criss-crossed against
a bright, ecclectic sky
like a kaliedoscope
peering into psychedelic fantasies.
Then a sizzle, crack and flash
of lightning
plunging feather-light and wispy fabric
into a shadowy valley
where all we can see
are the sun and moon
moving overhead
from white to many shades of dark,
while we hunker down,
confined to a tiny prism.
Copyright ©
CARAAAAA
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2012-05-12 03:42:25]
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Re: Many Shades Ago
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 12th May 2012 @ 07:44:08 AM AEST
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Re: Many Shades Ago
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 24th May 2012 @ 08:30:27 AM AEST
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I don't know how to express my admiration for this poem.
I don't know, but it's got me hooked.
Cheers,
Mickey. |
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Re: Many Shades Ago
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by flavellm on
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| absolutely A1 that my friend, brilliant. Captures the way I've felt in the past. Much love ta 4 sharing Mart |
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