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Honor Cords
Contributed by
EveAlone
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Sunday, 13th May 2012 @ 08:27:13 PM in AEST
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They told me to shoot for the moon
What if I miss?
Well, youll land among the stars
It was logical and reasonable
Subjectively testable
I aimed for the moon
And ran into the sun
Blinded I was not
I saw spots in the forefront
Launched back to earth
I spiraled into torment
I sunk to the bottom
Back in the hole
I cant reach my rope
Returning to dirt
I cant do this again
I feel like a troll
Was this all an illusion?
Was my feat a fake?
I care so much
Yet not at all
I feel so tiny
Invisible
Im 20 feet tall
Copyright ©
EveAlone
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2012-05-13 20:27:13]
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Re: Honor Cords
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by richard2 on
Sunday, 13th May 2012 @ 10:33:07 PM AEST
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You sure sound like a poet to me.
Liked this one a little better than 'full'.
Seemed to hang together more.
but poetry is in the eye of the reader
and this one likes your effort.
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Re: Honor Cords
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by doug on
Monday, 14th May 2012 @ 09:40:45 PM AEST
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| Your poem describes the plight of many a dreamer. I was one. I also shot for the moon and landed in crap. I've since learned that it's not a bad thing to... reach for the moon as long as one keeps one's feet planted on good solid ground... just in case. Best wishes to you . truly , doug |
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