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Stalker
Contributed by
autumnlady
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Tuesday, 15th May 2012 @ 07:38:36 AM in AEST
Topic:
surreal
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Miss Channing was watching him from her window;
She had been doing this for weeks now, but he didnt know;
He wasnt even aware that she lived on the opposite side of the lane;
And was the owner of the fawn-colored Great Dane;
Maybe shes a spy or works for the FBI;
But then probably not, because the subject of her interest is just an ordinary guy;
She knows everything about him and what he does;
What could she possibly want from a guy who doesnt even seem dangerous?
His life is monotonous day in, day out, the same routine;
Struggling hard to pay his bills on time by working as an accountant in a school canteen;
She was there in the supermarket, watching him from the corner;
If only he had turned around, he would have seen her;
She was the lady in the black leather dress, behind the Roberto Cavalli shades;
Her neighbors hardly know much about her;
Some say shes probably a private investigator;
This lady was classy from her head to her toe;
She wore only designer clothes and preferred Valentino;
She has an obsession for a particular plant species Venus fly traps and pitcher plants;
She once said that she always gets what she wants;
Indeed, if he ever goes missing;
Then who else may know his whereabouts but Miss Channing.
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autumnlady
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Re: Stalker
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by northernlights on
Tuesday, 15th May 2012 @ 08:41:23 AM AEST
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| Clever write wonderfully descriptive great detail really enjoyed. |
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Re: Stalker
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by i_see_herbert on
Tuesday, 15th May 2012 @ 01:05:09 PM AEST
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| Love it! Way to paint the picture. This is one where it was so well-written that I heard a specific voice reading the words to me, instead of playing them through my tone in my head. Well done. |
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Re: Stalker
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 15th May 2012 @ 01:14:43 PM AEST
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I'm so glad Ms. Channing doesn't reside in my neighborhood.
*shudders*
Thank you for an enjoyable read.
Tim |
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Re: Stalker
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by foreveryoung on
Tuesday, 15th May 2012 @ 11:47:18 PM AEST
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| Very nicely done i enjoyed this poem! |
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Re: Stalker
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by workinprogress on
Wednesday, 16th May 2012 @ 12:18:54 AM AEST
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| Nice work! I was engulfed! |
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