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Night to Day
Contributed by
Roselina666
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Tuesday, 15th May 2012 @ 08:37:21 AM in AEST
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The darkness is creeping,
Its never sleeping.
It swallows everything in its path.
It grows and seeps through every gap.
No light is to pierce through the thick fog
Of blackness and shadows.
No hero is to save the world from its endless engulfing of life itself.
Nothing can stop the shadows of the day,
Nor the shadows of the night,
From hiding everything.
The hands of darkness
Crash against the waves of dim light.
The light pushes through as its source grows larger, more in power.
Finally the darkness begins to hiss and die.
It runs away and hides under the earth,
Until night falls again
The light conquers the surface of the earth once more,
Awaiting another battle with the demonous shadows of the night.
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Roselina666
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2012-05-15 08:37:21]
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Re: Night to Day
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by richard2 on
Tuesday, 15th May 2012 @ 12:50:26 PM AEST
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seems it might fit into surreal to me
lots of darkness though
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Re: Night to Day
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by poewhit on
Tuesday, 15th May 2012 @ 01:52:44 PM AEST
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| Story like, though in the Bible, God, created night and day. The good and evil, all part of mortal life. [one page at a time] |
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Re: Night to Day
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by workinprogress on
Wednesday, 16th May 2012 @ 12:16:00 AM AEST
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| How about "Our battle"...as we struggle and triumph every day |
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Re: Night to Day
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by poetryislife on
Thursday, 17th May 2012 @ 12:36:51 PM AEST
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Roselina666, Hello
This poem and this is my suggestion can be posted in Ambiguous Poetry because it is a quite ambiguous poem. Additionally, it is very exciting poem, I have read it twice.
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