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The deeper side of me
Contributed by
workinprogress
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Thursday, 17th May 2012 @ 06:49:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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The constant push and pull.
It's not fair.
Not fair to you.
Back and forth
When will it stop?
Who is to blame?
A pointless game.
It takes time.
Time that we both have.
The push, the pull.
It's not your fault.
It's on the surface.
Can't you see?
Just give it time.
To no longer be.
Then you will see
The deeper side of me.
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2012-05-17 18:49:46]
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Re: The deeper side of me
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by jennyjen on
Thursday, 17th May 2012 @ 08:42:15 PM AEST
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| this is a really good poem, good job!!! :) |
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Re: The deeper side of me
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 15th July 2012 @ 08:40:06 PM AEST
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| Great poem! :) |
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Re: The deeper side of me
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by dvtpdw on
Tuesday, 17th July 2012 @ 02:42:01 PM AEST
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| I really like this. There is so much hidden in the play of your words. I liked the flow, and the strong power it gave me. Thank you for sharing, P. |
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