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PSALM
Contributed by
kvsangeeth
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Friday, 18th May 2012 @ 10:46:14 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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PSALM
Crushed concrete
Spoiled buildings
Shifted rails, but
no where a life found
Hanging wires, but
not having power
Slanting posts, but
not the leaning Pizza.
All fragmented, but
I found me, the one
who have saved
from among the rest
The hot sun burns to fire
I got weak and felt thirsty
I felt guilty, for
I am not died.
The rush I felt
not of friends
but only bodies
fully dead bodies
I walked into death
where I can see my friends,
have my water and
have my shelter
I got weak, so not fast
I have to run to reach
But for that I have to rise,
rise just from the dust.
I fully exhausted
so lied down
resting my head
on a red hot block
Then I opened my eyes
and saw my dear, near
The blue sky,clear and mild
winds with soothing fragrance;
I felt it's my new life
Copyright ©
kvsangeeth
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2012-05-18 10:46:14]
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Re: PSALM
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by Elizabeth_Dandy on
Friday, 18th May 2012 @ 04:00:02 PM AEST
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Beautiful tribute and remembrance song for the victims of the terrible earthquake.
I myself wrote a poem while the earthquake was going on. It is called Pyres and Tears.
Its here below for you to read.
http://www.postpoems.org/authors/blumentopf/poem/384974
They are with God now.
Blessings
Elizabeth |
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Re: PSALM
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by northernlights on
Saturday, 19th May 2012 @ 04:23:06 AM AEST
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| Poetry can leap over the language barrier and your heart is felt very stongly through this.I love the last verse of hope, of a way forward after such devastation and heartache.I could not write half as well as this in a language that was not my mother tongue. |
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Re: PSALM
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by sambonitz on
Monday, 28th May 2012 @ 08:05:43 AM AEST
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| i like the detail, thought and use of words in this poem. :) |
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