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Life Isn't Perfect
Contributed by
trisha
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Friday, 9th May 2003 @ 01:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I know hearts are broken everyday.
I wounder how I can ever trust someone.
I know I am young.
I would be with him everyday wiseful
Thinking.
Why is that some people loose and some
Few win theres so many answered questions.
I think that maybe if we didn't have bad times.
We would take all good times as granted.
When we loose our first love we see life isn't
Perfect
Copyright ©
trisha
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2003-05-09 01:05:00]
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Re: Life Isn't Perfect
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by darkkai on
Friday, 9th May 2003 @ 02:10:49 AM AEST
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I luv the title to your poem =o) on a lite note it is true of what u have said. on a good note there " There are plenty of fish in the sea."
there will be future comments from me and hints about myself. so here is the first hint
i'm very opimistic of certain scenarios and life itself.
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Re: Life Isn't Perfect
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by venkat on
Friday, 9th May 2003 @ 06:00:02 AM AEST
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| good write enjoyable.. venkat |
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Re: Life Isn't Perfect
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by AngryPrincess on
Saturday, 10th May 2003 @ 11:02:04 PM AEST
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you are very right trisha, life is not perfect, good poem
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Re: Life Isn't Perfect
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by ShadowsCloud on
Tuesday, 27th May 2003 @ 01:23:48 PM AEST
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Trisha, this poem has a lot of truth in it. Life is not perfect. And it really hurts when you loose your first love.
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Re: Life Isn't Perfect
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by stargazer on
Tuesday, 27th May 2003 @ 04:24:17 PM AEST
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I'm going through this now. My best friend... my life... my boy and things, I'm probably in too deep and probably to far over my head but its not easy to just give up someone like that. And you are right... if we didn't have our bad times we'd take the good for granted.
Very good...
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Re: Life Isn't Perfect
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by Trisha on
Saturday, 31st May 2003 @ 11:47:01 PM AEST
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| Hey Kai. What's up? Nothing too much over my way. Yes I do know there's other fish in the sea but I want him. He doesn't want a girlfriend how can I change his mind |
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