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children of war
Contributed by
thehotshotpoet
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Monday, 28th May 2012 @ 11:34:14 AM in AEST
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Reporters find the stories
to make money roll on track
what I write is not for money
but it is about Irac
I was looking at a paper
on the front a little girl
& I imagined her being yours or mine
just in another world
so afraid of the americans
her confusing asking why
they seem to want to kill me
do I really have to die
all she ever heard
is the evil that we do
Rather it was right or wrong
the nightmares are so true
The children have done nothing
& this war it is'nt right
there leader hides behind the innocent
after creating such a fight
the hot shot poet
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Re: children of war
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by MissTeenSuicide on
Thursday, 31st May 2012 @ 12:50:40 PM AEST
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True story!
Personally, I think the people who start these wars or have a problem with one another should be put in a ring and fight to the death, if they're willing to risk the lives of the innocent they should be willing to risk their own lives.
On to the poem! You did a brilliant job, got right to the point and said exactly what you wanted to without making it seem cryptic, but still making it flow well. Good job! |
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