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Open your eyes
Contributed by
workinprogress
on
Tuesday, 29th May 2012 @ 09:10:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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What is her problem?
Why can't she see?
He is her son
He is doing the best he can
I hope she does not regret this one day
He is scared for his life
His LIFE
His ripe, just unfolding life
Her daughter sees it
She wants to sever ties
Open your eyes
Can't you see?
Who is responsible?
Who cares
Just be there
For him
For her
For you
Without a mother
At such a ripe age
In his situation
OPEN YOUR EYES
Your heart is sure to follow
I know you didn't have a great example
Be the mother you never had
To the son
you may very well lose
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workinprogress
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2012-05-29 21:10:12]
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Re: Open your eyes
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by Elizabeth_Dandy on
Monday, 25th June 2012 @ 02:39:19 PM AEST
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As I see it, - we have here a very selfish and domineering mother, trying to hold on to her children and not permitting them to grow.
Fascinating topic.
Well done. Loved it,.
Elizabeth |
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