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Iris
Contributed by
plasticherry
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Sunday, 3rd June 2012 @ 03:38:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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Hold your breath as I dive into your eye
And watch the patterns multiply
Submerged in ethereal fluid floating, waning
My hands reaching through the hollow spaces
My heart sinking, slowly draining
The iris waters and now its raining
Copyright ©
plasticherry
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2012-06-03 15:38:25]
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Re: Iris
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 3rd June 2012 @ 03:57:10 PM AEST
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Surreal and pretty.
 to YPDC.
Tim
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Re: Iris
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by dojo1970 on
Sunday, 3rd June 2012 @ 05:09:02 PM AEST
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| great imagery. |
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Re: Iris
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by sebgreen on
Monday, 4th June 2012 @ 12:11:20 PM AEST
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| This is the kind of thing I really like. Cheers ! |
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Re: Iris
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by monday_girl on
Tuesday, 5th June 2012 @ 01:06:10 AM AEST
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| Thank you for being here, i was starting to think all poetry on this site is pretty bad :) |
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