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time to be dad
Contributed by
thehotshotpoet
on
Monday, 4th June 2012 @ 01:15:27 PM in AEST
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someone's gonna get there feelings hurt
this is one dad cannot fix
I will not deal with the little lies
or the stupid little tricks
what my children seem to overlook
is I have been right here before
but I never thought I'd see it from
the one's I do adore
the sad part is I see myself
in there sneaky little ways
their's not to much I havent seen
in my wilder days
but now I must correct
the things that have went on for to long
they may not be that serious
but in my eye's they still are wrong
so no matter if this seems hateful
& I will do what I must do
to show my love is unconditional
for everyone of you
your dad
the hot shot poet
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Re: time to be dad
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by NightMareShoGun on
Monday, 4th June 2012 @ 01:55:30 PM AEST
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| intense poetry thanks for the read |
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Re: time to be dad
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by gypsymaddness on
Monday, 4th June 2012 @ 06:30:44 PM AEST
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| All the poems I read of yours is filled with your emotion and life. There full of personality and even flair. Thanks for sharing all your poems with us. Great work :-) |
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Re: time to be dad
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by Me1234 on
Monday, 4th June 2012 @ 07:50:47 PM AEST
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| You're a very, very good writer :) |
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Re: time to be dad
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 5th June 2012 @ 02:30:45 AM AEST
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Yeah, they can't get anything by us Dads, can they? :)
They may be here
But we're always over here watching |
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Re: time to be dad
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by Sasha on
Tuesday, 5th June 2012 @ 04:43:26 AM AEST
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| well written... |
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