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Be My Wife
Contributed by
ramfire
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Friday, 8th June 2012 @ 03:29:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Your sweet words given me past time do play
with ease upon this happy mind again.
Together we can take a stroll this day
and Ill relate to you some lofty gain.
That lofty gain is you dear Joan , come stay
with me forever through all life s bad rain.
Then Ill give you things eer my joyful way
and youll have life thats neer been used in vain
Copyright ©
ramfire
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2012-06-08 15:29:50]
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Re: Be My Wife
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by Maygee on
Friday, 8th June 2012 @ 09:32:43 PM AEST
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| Very sweet, short but powerful :) |
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Re: Be My Wife
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by emystar on
Thursday, 14th June 2012 @ 02:47:12 AM AEST
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Beautiful write.
This should just melt her.
huggs, smiles, blessings,
emy |
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Re: Be My Wife
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by Elizabeth_Dandy on
Monday, 25th June 2012 @ 03:28:51 PM AEST
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Beautifull- tender and perfect .
The perfect Shakespearian Octave, so touchingly and eloquently composed.
Yes she should really melt.
Thanks a lot for sharing
Blessings
lizabeth
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