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What love is...
Contributed by
ellewood
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Sunday, 10th June 2012 @ 04:55:50 PM in AEST
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love is that moment
when you look into his eyes
and much to my total surprise
I could see deep into his soul
emotions that he thinks that he can control
but at certain times he lets go
our souls connect
intertwining
feelings before that he was afraid to show
our hearts unite
at that moment he has given up the fight
as he shows his hearts desire
making our souls ignite on fire
a deep love that we share
showing each other how much we care
what is love I often have pondered
love is two hearts beating as one
meshing together and having some fun
love is raw and warm
love is together.... facing the storm
what love is to me
Is what I hope you see
for I know the best is yet to come
way deep down in my soul
is where this feeling is coming from
I love you more than words can say
so please remember that when you go away
because it is in this heart that I want you to stay
Copyright ©
ellewood
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2012-06-10 16:55:50]
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Re: What love is...
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by Archie on
Sunday, 10th June 2012 @ 06:43:35 PM AEST
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| Raw emotion, not bad. I could not follow the beats that well so I don't know how this is supposed to sound, yet it is a good read. |
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Re: What love is...
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by snc54 on
Monday, 11th June 2012 @ 12:30:30 PM AEST
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| very nice write |
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Re: What love is...
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 11th June 2012 @ 08:07:25 PM AEST
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Love consists of mercy, patience and compromise.
Lust and love are different, there's the temporary deep intense love that's like setting sail in speed boat on a sunny day and then get caught in a storm at sea, and there's the true love, that's like sailing an ocean in a sturdy boat, the winds batter you, there are waves on top of waves, there is thunder and lightning, but after it all you emerge unscathed and appreciate the beauty and serenity of the ocean when it's still and the sun is beaming, the sails are full and you're on course for your destination. |
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