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Out The In Door
Contributed by
Milan
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Thursday, 14th June 2012 @ 02:19:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Am I dead?
Am I alive?
Have I been born?
Am I satisfied?
Out here, nothing exists
Out here, we are infinite
Out here, we is forever
You were once your own
Of your own creation
The first and last of your kind
You were sucked up
stripped bare
coughed up
naked and unaware
Milan, PLEASE: To help keep this site INTERACTIVE, please read and comment on at least 1 poem for each one you submit.
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Milan
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Re: Out The In Door
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by sebgreen on
Thursday, 14th June 2012 @ 04:20:15 PM AEST
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Peculiar. Each "stanza" stands on its own yet the message is in the whole. Hmmm
Interesting thoughts, thanks ! |
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