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Forgive
Contributed by
SaxophoneJones
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Thursday, 14th June 2012 @ 08:47:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Forgive me my love
My mind succumbs to my heart
I lose you once more
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Re: Forgive
(User Rating: 1 )
by SLAMMER on
Friday, 15th June 2012 @ 12:41:38 PM AEST
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| i think you chose good words just that it is short so you left me hanging a bit |
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Re: Forgive
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by sherrypink on
Monday, 18th June 2012 @ 04:58:32 AM AEST
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| so short feels like there should be more to follow. |
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